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Omniforce vs burgerton!
In the quaint town of collindale
The citizens were currently abuzz by the grand opening for a brand new eatery.
"Alrighty,ladies and gents! I,burgher t. burgerton,gladly declare my new restaurant OPEN!" said the owner as he pushed in the double doors.
The huge crowd of people began to clap and cheer before they started to literally stampede inside the burger joint.
"And remember folks,don't forget to try out my special secret burghersauce!" He announced as he went inside to take his new customers orders.
"Hehe,what these idgits don't know is the secret is a special,addicting,mind-control agent that'll have 'em keep coming back for more and more." Thought mr.burgerton.
For it was true.
One week after the new burger joint's grand opening,almost everyone in town had become mindless,burger-addicted,zombies!
But our young hero,omniforce,approaches the restaurant and prepares for a fast food fight!
"MR.BURGER MAN,YOUR RAIN OF GREASEY TERROR ENDS HERE!" the boy shouted as he burst through the
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Question kid synopsis
Quincy quarman was always a boy of high intelligence and logic,but was always shunned and mocked by his peers because of this.
Of course,he would always dismiss this,but he would secretly yurn to be popular amongst the other children in his school.
It would only be on the month of October that an opportunity would arise.
On the night of hollows eve,the young prodigy would use his genius intellect and technological prowess to construct a realistic superhero outfit for the local junior high Halloween costume contest.
However,little Quincy ran into a slight obstacle when the school bully,terrence,and his gang of delinquents tried to steal his costume so they could win the 30$ prize.
Luckily,the young genius was able to foil the degenerates using the features on his costume,won the contest,and found his true calling as a young,intellectual,crimefighter.
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Captain umbrella boy synopsis
Preston scotty was once an ordinary 10-year old boy who lived and worked at his parents umbrella shop located on the rough side of his hometown,arrondale,where crime was always rampant.
All was fine in preston's life until he unfortunately suffered a severe case of amnesia after a somewhat clumsy fall in the shop,trying to grab an expensive umbrella from a high self on top of a ladder.
Also,not only did the amnesia cause him to lose all his memories;but,it caused his memories to be replaced to him thinking he is a goofy,crimefighting,hero,captain umbrella boy.
Now,not only is the child the new defender of his beloved hometown;but,also the catalyst of most of the oddities that endanger it with only his trusty trick umbrella to fight back.
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Clown kid synopsis
Bowy honka was once an ordinary inhabitant of the planet k. Zooa,a place located 2 galaxies away from ours where almost everyone and everything has a warped and clown-like appearance,at least until their enemies of the neighboring planet,the blights,raided and eventually destroyed it after an intense war.
However,before he could suffer the same fate as the rest of his home,his caregivers boarded him on the nearest escape pod set a course for earth.
After a 4 week trip,the young extraterrestrial crashed landed in an old abandoned amusement park located in the small town of sonnyville. After noticing some of  the strange occurrences that often go on in his new home;he decided to protect it from meeting the same fate as his beloved k. Zooa
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Egg lad synopsis
Egmund yolkmier a.k.a egg lad is the local child hero of kernel vally,a small country town of austin' Texas.
Along with his little sister/sidekick peep yolkmier a.k.a little chick,an assortment of egg-themed and shaped gadgets and weaponry,and his clever wits and technological skills;he promises to protect his hometown from any kind of danger no matter how big or small.
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Burger kid origins
Billy b. Wellington was once a very frequent customer at the town burger joint "happy clown",a restaurant with a locally poor reputation for below quality food,that was subjected to a horrible,life changing,incident.
Apparently,the child had consumed an extremely radioactive burger that inexplicably caused the boy's entire head to change and mutate into a hamburger;buns,cheese,pickles,and all.
Soon,the news of the incident spread among the townspeople,and the restaurant was permanently closed down,to which the fast food hybrid youngster now resides,after leaving his old life behind because of his horrible mutation.
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In the quaint town of collindale
The citizens were currently abuzz by the grand opening for a brand new eatery.
"Alrighty,ladies and gents! I,burgher t. burgerton,gladly declare my new restaurant OPEN!" said the owner as he pushed in the double doors.
The huge crowd of people began to clap and cheer before they started to literally stampede inside the burger joint.
"And remember folks,don't forget to try out my special secret burghersauce!" He announced as he went inside to take his new customers orders.
"Hehe,what these idgits don't know is the secret is a special,addicting,mind-control agent that'll have 'em keep coming back for more and more." Thought mr.burgerton.
For it was true.
One week after the new burger joint's grand opening,almost everyone in town had become mindless,burger-addicted,zombies!
But our young hero,omniforce,approaches the restaurant and prepares for a fast food fight!
"MR.BURGER MAN,YOUR RAIN OF GREASEY TERROR ENDS HERE!" the boy shouted as he burst through the front doors.
"Why hello youngin',welcome to burgher's burgers,may I take your order." Greeted Mr.burgerton to the red caped lad as the boy slowly approached the front counter.
"My only ORDER is that you release these innocent people from your evil fast food forces!"
"What was that,boy." Growled burgerton.
"I know of your scheme. Your using the sinister secret sauce on your burgers to manipulate these civilians into becoming completely addicted. Thus,putting all the other fast food joints in town out of business;putting YOU on the very top of the food chain." Deduced omni.
"Well,well,well. We've got ourselves a smart kid here. Luckily I've already prepared for this kind of...setback." burgher said menacingly as he quickly reached under the counter and pulled out a megaphone.
"ATTENTION,LOYAL CUSTOMERS! IT WOULD SEEM THIS HERE UNASSUMING "HERO" CHILD  WISHES  TO TEAR DOWN OUR LITTLE GREASE LADENED HEAVEN. AND SINCE WE CAN'T BE HAVIN' ANY OF THAT,I HEREBY PROPOSE A QUITE FINE LITTLE OFFER FOR ALL OF YOU BURGHER BRAINS. ANYONE WHO GRABS AND HOGTIES THE LITTLE NUISANCE GETS FREE BURGERS FOR A YEAR."
It was at that moment that everyone inside the restaurant quickly got up  from their seats and started to slowly charge towards the young boy.
"I don't think so!" Said omniforce.
The boy then leaped into the air,above the angry crowd of mesmerized customers,and briefly shined that all to familiar glow around his body.
"HERO FORM,ACTIVATE!" Shouted omniforce.
The bright red glow faded as fast as it started and revealed omniforce;now wearing blue pajamas and a night cap covered in yellow stars.
"DREAM LAD!" he shouted as the boy landed behind the angry crowd.
"OK everyone,have a taste of my SLEEPING DUST!" Said dream lad as he grabbed and reached inside his night cap and pulled out a handful of purple powder that he blew into the crowd that knocked them all out in a deep sleep.
"Ha,now it's YOUR turn burgerton!"
"Grrr,if ya want somethin' done right,ya gotta do it yourself."said burgerton as he jumped over the front counter,preparing for a fight.
"Bring it on!" The young hero then pulled a seemingly ordinary pillow from out of thin air and tossed it at burgerton,to which it immediately exploded in a burst of feathers;concealing everything inside the restaurant,including dream lad.
"WHAT THE-" shouted burgerton.
"How do you like my pillow bomb, burger bum?" Taunted dream lad as he ran towards the villain through the cloud of floating feathers.
"Now get ready for my SLEEPYTIME KNOCKOUT PUNCHES!" He said as he got close enough to deliver a barrage of of heavy handed punches to burgerton's hefty body.
However,being as large as he was,dream lad's punches barely did an ounce of damage to the man,and as he was about to throw another punch,burgerton suddenly got a hold of his surroundings,grabbed the boy's arm and threw him through the front doors.
"Ow,I don't get it,my punches should of knocked him out cold."
"Hehehe,they don't call me burgerTON for nothing." Taunted burgerton as he came out to confront the young hero.
"Guess I'm gonna have to go with something special for you." Our hero said as he picked himself up off the ground.
"HERO FORM,EXCHANGE!"
the child crimefighter briefly began to glow bright red once again and reappeared,now wearing only red and white headband and a red leotard with a yellow,triangle shaped insignia on the chest with ML on it.
"MUSCLE LAD!"
upon seeing his other form,burgerton burst into a fit of laughter.
"HAHAHA,y-you actually think that little "ballet outfit" is gonna stop me?"
"guess we're gonna have to find out,won't we,lard butt."
"Alrighty,you little brat,'nough talkin',let's get to rumblin'." Said burgerton as he cracked his knuckles.
"Ladies first."
Growing impatient with the young hero,the crooked restauranteur began to charge toward the child,throwing his arm back,so to deliver a devastating blow.
However,when burgerton was in close enough range to throw a punch,muscle lad had blocked his blow by catching his huge fist with both his hands,and proceeded to throw the large man over his shoulder and into a brick wall.
"Ugh,what in the world." grunted burgerton as he painfully tries to get up off the ground.
"Not so tough now,huh,burger breath." Taunted muscle lad.
"What in the name of ground beef are you,kid?" Asked burgerton growing nervous  of the outcome of the fight.
"I'm the hero." He said heroically.
it was at that moment that the beastly man's slight nervousness was replaced by boiling anger. he wasn't going to let some kid ruin his plans.
it was then that burgerton quickly rushed towards muscle lad and began throw a
a barrage of bareknuckle jabs,to which the young lad managed to dodge and evade with ease.
it was then that muscle lad decided to deploy his finishing move.
after burgerton threw his last misdirected punch before he began to succumb to fatigue;the child quickly jumped up,balled up his fist,threw back his arm,and....
"ORDER UP!"
He delivered a super strength power punch directly to burgerton's fatty jaw;knocking him out cold with a huge thud to the ground.
"Ok,that takes care of old buns for brains,but i still need to turn everyone in town back to normal. Come on,think."
He began to quickly pondered on how to snap nearly everyone in town out of their burger induced hypnosis,until he came to a stunning idea.
"I got it! HERO FORM,EXCHANGE!" he shouted as the familiar red glow began to engulf his body,once more.
The glow quickly faded to reveal omniforce now donning a child sized chef's garb and holding what looked to be an old wooden spoon.
"COOK LAD! Ok,i hope this works."
He began to inexplicably wave his wooden spoon in the air while it started to glow bright orange around the top.
"burger mountain!"
With a flick of his glowing spoon,a giant plate full of burgers sliders stacked into a perfect Pyramid appeared out thin air.
The delicious aroma from the stacks of sliders traveled throughout the entire town,including inside the restaurant with all the soon to be reawakened zombies,and lured all the mesmerized people towards it's location.
And so,as soon as all the civilians were in close vicinity of the burger sliders,they charged towards them and started devouring every last slider on the oversized plate;thus,triggering a reaction that caused the citizens hypnosis to diminish.
"W-where am I?" Said a random man in the de-zombified crowd.
"What's happening?" Said a random woman.
"Why do I feel so full?" Said a man with a rather enlarged stomach.
"Another job well done. Now all I have to do is get tubby here to prison." Said a Victorious omniforce as he returned to his original form.
And,our story ends with the young hero slowly dragging dragging burgerton toward the collindale prison and into the sunset.....eventually.
THE END 

Omniforce vs burgerton!
Another installment in the story of the young hero,OMNIFORCE!

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Quincy quarman was always a boy of high intelligence and logic,but was always shunned and mocked by his peers because of this.
Of course,he would always dismiss this,but he would secretly yurn to be popular amongst the other children in his school.
It would only be on the month of October that an opportunity would arise.
On the night of hollows eve,the young prodigy would use his genius intellect and technological prowess to construct a realistic superhero outfit for the local junior high Halloween costume contest.
However,little Quincy ran into a slight obstacle when the school bully,terrence,and his gang of delinquents tried to steal his costume so they could win the 30$ prize.
Luckily,the young genius was able to foil the degenerates using the features on his costume,won the contest,and found his true calling as a young,intellectual,crimefighter.
Preston scotty was once an ordinary 10-year old boy who lived and worked at his parents umbrella shop located on the rough side of his hometown,arrondale,where crime was always rampant.
All was fine in preston's life until he unfortunately suffered a severe case of amnesia after a somewhat clumsy fall in the shop,trying to grab an expensive umbrella from a high self on top of a ladder.
Also,not only did the amnesia cause him to lose all his memories;but,it caused his memories to be replaced to him thinking he is a goofy,crimefighting,hero,captain umbrella boy.
Now,not only is the child the new defender of his beloved hometown;but,also the catalyst of most of the oddities that endanger it with only his trusty trick umbrella to fight back.
Bowy honka was once an ordinary inhabitant of the planet k. Zooa,a place located 2 galaxies away from ours where almost everyone and everything has a warped and clown-like appearance,at least until their enemies of the neighboring planet,the blights,raided and eventually destroyed it after an intense war.
However,before he could suffer the same fate as the rest of his home,his caregivers boarded him on the nearest escape pod set a course for earth.
After a 4 week trip,the young extraterrestrial crashed landed in an old abandoned amusement park located in the small town of sonnyville. After noticing some of  the strange occurrences that often go on in his new home;he decided to protect it from meeting the same fate as his beloved k. Zooa
Egmund yolkmier a.k.a egg lad is the local child hero of kernel vally,a small country town of austin' Texas.
Along with his little sister/sidekick peep yolkmier a.k.a little chick,an assortment of egg-themed and shaped gadgets and weaponry,and his clever wits and technological skills;he promises to protect his hometown from any kind of danger no matter how big or small.
So I was on working another story.
Don't worry I haven't forgotten about the previous story I was working on I've just been busy this past month.
So anyway,it kinda has the same concept as Ben 10 in which a boy finds an object(in this case,a magic red cape) that can turn him into different heroes to stop evil,and sometimes weird,forces in his town over the summer.
Now I know it's usually wrong to plagiarize a plot to a different movie or show,but I just couldn't get the idea out of my head that I just had to write about it.
Also,the actual story will most likely be a collection of one shot short.

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